BURNED
The sun was high that day,
hot, burning the backs of our necks,
reddening our unsuspecting skin.
We followed the tracks,
going farther
than either of us
had ever been;
inseparable in my eyes,
though
not in yours.
Welcome You, Whose Smile Is My Muse
The sun was high that day,
hot, burning the backs of our necks,
reddening our unsuspecting skin.
We followed the tracks,
going farther
than either of us
had ever been;
inseparable in my eyes,
though
not in yours.
Written by poeticgrin
August 16, 2008 at 9:13 am
Posted in Burned
Tagged with Childhood Memory, Creative Writing, Free Verse, Friendship, Lost Friendship, Memory, Poem, Poet, Poetry, Teenage Memory, Writer, Writing
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good to see this – thanks
deanjbaker
August 18, 2008 at 2:37 pm
I love that line “our unsuspecting skin.” A touch, the sun’s rays, so many tangible memories driven to and through our skin. I love that.
Lo
August 26, 2008 at 12:38 pm