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BURNED

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The sun was high that day,
hot, burning the backs of our necks,
reddening our unsuspecting skin.
We followed the tracks,
going farther
than either of us
had ever been;
inseparable in my eyes,
though
not in yours.

Written by poeticgrin

August 16, 2008 at 9:13 am

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  1. good to see this – thanks

    deanjbaker

    August 18, 2008 at 2:37 pm

  2. I love that line “our unsuspecting skin.” A touch, the sun’s rays, so many tangible memories driven to and through our skin. I love that.

    Lo

    August 26, 2008 at 12:38 pm


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